Mum

by kahpot

when I was young, and loved my Mum
I learned to speak, my first word Mum
my first steps weak, but straight to Mum
first day at school, I missed my Mum

when I got home, I hugged my Mum
when I was young, and loved my Mum
homework unknown reviewed by Mum
playtime mine, encouraged by Mum

a working boy, so proud my Mum
a paycheck earned, I gave my Mum
when I was young, and loved my Mum
years of grey now adorn my Mum

a man can say he loves his Mum
my baby still, would say my Mum
beauty untouched, is heart of Mum
my whole life long, I've loved my Mum

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Writing Prompt
Write a rhyming poem that starts with

When I was young and ......

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Some say Mum-Some say Mom-it's all love to me

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