Self Improvement Poetry posted March 3, 2022

This work has reached the exceptional level


by kahpot

when I was young, and loved my Mum
I learned to speak, my first word Mum
my first steps weak, but straight to Mum
first day at school, I missed my Mum

when I got home, I hugged my Mum
when I was young, and loved my Mum
homework unknown reviewed by Mum
playtime mine, encouraged by Mum

a working boy, so proud my Mum
a paycheck earned, I gave my Mum
when I was young, and loved my Mum
years of grey now adorn my Mum

a man can say he loves his Mum
my baby still, would say my Mum
beauty untouched, is heart of Mum
my whole life long, I've loved my Mum

The Past writing prompt entry
Writing Prompt
Write a rhyming poem that starts with

When I was young and ......

Thank you memephotos for the wonderful artwork

Some say Mum-Some say Mom-it's all love to me
Pays one point and 2 member cents.

Artwork by memephotos at

Save to Bookcase Promote This Share or Bookmark
Print It View Reviews

You need to login or register to write reviews. It's quick! We only ask four questions to new members.

© Copyright 2023. kahpot All rights reserved.
kahpot has granted, its affiliates and its syndicates non-exclusive rights to display this work.