General Poetry posted January 27, 2012


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it wont leave my head, that so many are dead.

Tsunami 5-7-5

by CerysBarbour

Unable to breath
Getting hit by the debre
living feels guilty



5-7-5 Poetry contest entry


i often hear about people in tsunamis that feel very guilty that they lived and others didnt and they often describe how it seemed like hours rather than seconds.I will hopefully never know what it feels like but here is what i have learnt about one.
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