General Fiction posted August 12, 2020


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Unseen

by Wils


Nobody saw.

Not the bartender. He was busy dealing with his drunken customers, causing them to fall deeper into hazy oblivion.

Not the crowd. Above the jostling, screaming and half dark room there is no way they could.

Not the girl, she wasn’t even there. One will never know what would have happened if she hadn’t decided to go to the bathroom at that moment. It made things so much easier.

Easy to order her another cocktail, to slip in a little something, to mix it in whilst stirring the umbrella.

I was going to have me some fun tonight!

 



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