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Zig-Zagging, My Way by humpwhistle

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hw, this is so wonderful. Many non-fiction stories lean towards this happened then this then that...humdrum. But not you. You creatively use comparison to weave the past with the present and entwine the memories of kidhood with the reality and changes of now. As always, you include your great sense of humor, metaphors and similes with such smooth storytelling. I'm sorry you're going through all the medical rigmarole, and hope your swans were negative. (It kinda bugs me they call that creepy crawler the same as a great beer!) Keep your humor on the lookout and listen to your music on the treadmill...it makes it easier. Take care, hw.
Smiles,
Indy
Comment Written by IndianaIrish on 29-Aug-2020

The New Ghost Dance by humpwhistle

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I just let out a in enormous deep sigh of reader satisfaction, hw. Everything about this story is written with perfection from the first sentence to the last. Your inspiration and imagination remains an ability and gift to truly envy. I adored
Lone Last Guy and the introduction of Charlie and Wilber and feel they were brought into the story at the perfect time. Your clever use of words and phrases, mixed into the tale, made me smile, laugh, and hold this story closer ... rakish beret, mediocre SAT scores, zipper lobby, did you ty he casino, etc are out of place in his world and makes it very funny. Of course I loved his practice jiggles without his BVDs and feeling like a true savage. Outstanding in every way, hw. A story easily never forgotten. And I just know some Apache women will soon join the first guys to build a new land.
Indy

Why not list the other two stories in your trilogy to lure some more reads?
Comment Written by IndianaIrish on 19-Aug-2020

Up the Stairs by Gloria ....

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Loved the combination of your words and the artwork, Gloria. Great imagery, rhyme, and enjambment in your powerful four lines. It's great to be reviewing again.
Smiles,
Karyn
Comment Written by IndianaIrish on 16-Jul-2020

It's Enough to Say It Was by prodigal

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Well, here's a writer from years back! It's good to see you back here on FanStory prodigal, and hope you hang around. I enjoyed your lyrics and the video with your words put to music was emotional and brought life to your words. Your song is moving and very relatable.

Just wondering...in the first verse, is it a typo with was it was or should be what it was like the rest?

Smiles,
Indy (Karyn}
Comment Written by IndianaIrish on 16-Jul-2020

Donut Intervention by humpwhistle

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This is without a doubt the kind of story I wish I have your imagination and talent to put pictures in the reader's mind and put words together like a true sword slinger, hw. Outstanding imagery, character presentation, and excellent story to read. Not only did I love the story, you made my mouth water for lemon...any kind of lemon! It's good to be reviewing you again, hw. You're a writer who makes me glad to be a member here.
Smiles,
Indy
Comment Written by IndianaIrish on 13-Jul-2020

About My Mom - Phyllis Stewart by Phyllis Stewart

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Thank you, Katy, for including her FanStory family as an important part of her life. Blessings to all who loved Phyllis as sorrow fills your hearts. She will be missed.
Karyn
Comment Written by IndianaIrish on 12-Jan-2020

My Story--Sorta by humpwhistle

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I do love how you can take an isolated incident from your life and add dialogue, build the characterizations, add some bits of your imagination, and delight your reader with your distictive humor. Love your Hill stories.
Smiles,
Indy :-)
Comment Written by IndianaIrish on 31-Dec-2019

The Pepper Plot by humpwhistle

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Only you,hw, could write such an outstanding story about a pepper grinder! Everything bout this mystery is entertaining, and just a fantastic written story and the ending is so satisfying for a reader.
Smiles,
Indy :-)
Comment Written by IndianaIrish on 31-Dec-2019

Jasper and the King Crow by humpwhistle

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Truly a well written and fun fun fable, hw. Love the character of Jasper the crow ... Ido believe he might have a bit of the Orish under those feathers. I enjoyed this story../it's always fun to watch the royals get a bit of reality.
Smiles.
Indy
Comment Written by IndianaIrish on 31-Dec-2019

Dwayne's Reins by humpwhistle

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This would make a excellent Christmas book, hw. Love the story, and your imagination has always made me so glad I've been your fan for almost ten years. I love the idea of passing the job down to the hardest working elf next in line. And Santa and the Mrs deserve some warm climate and time together. Loved the story...oh, said that already.
Smiles,
Indy
Comment Written by IndianaIrish on 29-Dec-2019
Read and reviewed with blinders on.


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