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Wonderland by Sharon Haiste

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Liked, so much said in so little words.
Imagery snowmen enjoying snowball
fight in short winter season. Background
mesh with winter scene. Great title Haiku.
Comment Written by Lynar on 07-Jan-2020

I'm So Hungry! by Commando

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I enjoyed how your poem is set not on earth but beyond in prayer. The setting a closed home. It made me think more of a Intercession poem calling on God to intercede. (Prayer to remember the less fortunate people other than yourself) The image brought the imprint of your words in mind. Exceptional.
Comment Written by Lynar on 02-Jan-2020

Frozen Ice Forms Ethereal Shapes by Mark D. R.

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I enjoyed your descriptive words to identify Nature and the Environment.
(how light reflects against frozen waterfall; ice crystal shapes) The image mesh well, in my mind. Exceptional.
Comment Written by Lynar on 02-Jan-2020
Read and reviewed with blinders on.

What God Made by LeannaP

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I like how it stimulate my memory
in the Garden of Eden at the start.
The image pictures position as Adam
protecting her and how she deceived
him. Their nakedness without clothes
sense no shame of fleshly appearance.
Yes! It did resonate in my mind in two
lines very clearly...
Comment Written by Lynar on 13-Dec-2019

Matters of heart by Anuradha Dev

Exceptional
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I enjoyed how you wrote with imagery. The scene
could be understood clearly. Excellent flowing in
stream of thought. I like how opposites attract and
infatuation not real love being to young. As years
flow wisdom grows in relationships. No adverse or
additional comments. Exceptional.
Comment Written by Lynar on 12-Jul-2019

Life Coaching 101-Vision Your Story by HealingMuse

Exceptional
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What I most liked about this self-improvement post was the after engagement interaction that I tried. It worked. Through the process of deep meditation and answer sequence by applying the right and left hand approach was fun with an excellent result for seniors too!
Your writing was very concise, helpful and unique... I found no negatives.
Exceptional review.
Comment Written by Lynar on 11-Apr-2019

Note to Self? by Alcreator Litt Dear

Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

What I liked about this poem was its
spiritual side. It gives credit to God.
It shows the best way to live in life.
It has great impact on mind imagery.
End message speak truth, write simple
with no harsh words. A shared wisdom
in life. Thanks for sharing. No negative
comments. Exceptional.
Comment Written by Lynar on 17-Dec-2018

Pardon Me? by karenina

Exceptional
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I could understand clearly by your philosophy,
just how to much power may make a person
fell he can't be touched and the law doesn't
apply to him. It's quite an illusion. Well done.
Well done with the use of so few words that
made you think. Picture meshed well. No
negative comments. Exceptional Commentary.
Comment Written by Lynar on 05-Jun-2018
Read and reviewed with blinders on.

Faulty Umbrella by Joy Graham

Exceptional
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Enjoyed the fewest number of words. Your extra attention
to creativity went well. A very descriptive title well done.
Your reference to Mary Poppins made the humor with your
selected image. No negative comments. Exceptional.

Comment Written by Lynar on 05-Jun-2018

Deadication to Dean by rjuselius

Exceptional
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It definitely was funny with Dean in the hot seat. I enjoyed the rhyme and flow that gave more validity in thought. Professionalism that was done with class to honor guest. By example: His brain inevitably insane, disturbed, made me laugh. Great dedication poetry to a unique person. No negative comments. Exceptional.
Comment Written by Lynar on 21-Dec-2017


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