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Truly The Last Boy Scout by BeasPeas
Chapter 16 of the book Family Matters ~ Poetry & Prose

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What a wonderful tribute to your father, with this well written and well structured Rime Couee poem. Just one small observation:
this good boy turned good man, no doubts. (should that be doubt? not 'doubts'?
Warmest regards, Marijke :o)
Comment Written by fionageorge on 23-Mar-2017

Kyle by CD Richards
Chapter 21 of the book Miscellaneous stories

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A heart-rending and yet uplifting I remember story. So much to learn at such a young age, and some very empathetic advice for the readers. Great read, well written, I wish you well in the contest. Warmest regards, Marijke :o)
Comment Written by fionageorge on 23-Mar-2017

Time To Step Out Of My Comfort Zone by Sasha

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... and of course, all the luck in the world for this. I can't wait to read chapter one, and contrary to your own belief, I have seen far worse grammar and spelling than on any of your rants I have enjoyed over the years (see... I don't think that last sentence of mine was grammatically correct!). I enjoyed reading this, had a laugh or two along the way, and as I said, am looking forward to chapter one, bring it on! Warmest regards, Marijke :o) xxxx
Comment Written by fionageorge on 23-Mar-2017

Keeper of the Shop by bichonfrisegirl

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Ah, yes, that demon drink. I believe it can cause quite some misfortunes when imbibed in large quantities. Loved this poem, it told a whole story and although on a serious subject, was cheeky and fun. Thanks for sharing and warmest regards, Marijke :o) xxxx
Comment Written by fionageorge on 22-Mar-2017

Precious by Dorothy Farrell

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Yes, you have certainly ticked all the boxes for a Lanturne Poem, and in the process have managed to tell a 'story' in such a difficult and structured format. Well done, and thanks for sharing. Warmest regards, Marijke :o)
Comment Written by fionageorge on 22-Mar-2017

Ode to Migrating Birds by Sandra du Plessis
Chapter 26 of the book 34. Seasons

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What a delightful Ode to Migrating Birds, Sandra. Very descriptive and good flow and excellent rhyme scheme. Thanks for sharing, my friend and warmest regards, Marijke :o)
Comment Written by fionageorge on 22-Mar-2017

Autumn starts by Sandra du Plessis
Chapter 25 of the book 34. Seasons

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Lovely descriptive 2-4-2 poem, which paints a picture in the mind of the reader, Sandra. Loved listening to Moving Autumn, just beautiful. Thanks for sharing and warmest regards, Marijke :o) xxx
Comment Written by fionageorge on 22-Mar-2017

Reward yourself forever by melyuki

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Wonderful and inspiring poem, as always, Mel. I love your attitude to life and to living life to the fullest. So true. Your words always inspire me to be positive, and yes, laughter is still the best medicine. Take care Mel. Warm wishes with miles of those happy laughing smiles coming your way. Marijke :o) xxxx
Comment Written by fionageorge on 21-Mar-2017

No poem as lovely HaikuChall 15 Tree by Gaye Hemsley

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A lovely and very descriptive HaikuChall. Well structured, and accompanied by appropriate picture. Thanks for sharing and warmest regards, Marijke :o)
Comment Written by fionageorge on 20-Mar-2017

Stir of Spring by BeasPeas
Chapter 21 of the book Haiku and Nature Poems ~ 2012-2017

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A lovely poem welcoming the Spring - or rather, encouraging the Spring to arrive. Good flow, excellent rhyme and the words bring a visual impact to the reader. Thanks for sharing and warmest regards, Marijke :o)
Comment Written by fionageorge on 20-Mar-2017


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