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Connie C

Write On! by nancy_e_davis

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I know I was around FanStory when you originally posted this, but I guess I missed this one. I love this, Nancy, and I can so relate! You rhyme is perfect, and I did so enjoy reading this. I really like how you worked antihistamine into your rhyming.
Hugs,
Connie
Comment Written by Connie C on 07-Jan-2020

Our Leaders by nancy_e_davis

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Hi Nancy,
It's been a long time since I've ventured onto FanStory, and I had to look you up with you being one of my favorites. I so enjoyed reading this poem because I agree 100% with you. We need to get rid of our country's leaders and start anew with, for starters, people who are not only leaders but who are genuinely nice people. That seems to be lacking with our current leader.
I hope you are doing well. I think of you when I think of FanStory. My niece is moving to Spring Creek, Nevada next week, which I hear is near Elko--a long ways from me.
I've been busy and haven't felt too inspired to write lately, although I am working on a poem regarding all the horrible shootings that have occurred and the fear that has resulted.
So happy to see that you are still writing your exceptional poetry.
Lots of Hugs,
Connie
Comment Written by Connie C on 20-Aug-2019

Supercalifragilisticexpialidocio by Michele Harber

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Wow! Congratulations on such a well-deserved win. To tackle such a word and use wonderful rhyme and a most relevant message to all of us is perfection!
Connie
Comment Written by Connie C on 17-May-2019

Search The Past by nancy_e_davis

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Forgive me, Nancy, if I'm always showering your poems with six-star ratings. I just can't help myself!! Every poem you write is so exceptional.
Here you write about losing and missing Jim, and each of these poems about him are so real and touching. Your rhyme and meter are excellent and your message so heartfelt.
As always, nice work.
Connie
Comment Written by Connie C on 04-May-2019

A Love Letter by nancy_e_davis

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This just flows along so beautifully, Nancy. I can feel the poor narrator's sorrow because you stated it so clearly. I hope he comes back to her, given what a gifted poet she is!
My best to you, my friend.
Connie xoxo
Comment Written by Connie C on 02-May-2019

Don't Trust The Yellow Fellow! by Debra White

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What a fun little poem this is, Debra. It just moves along with great meter and rhyme and was truly a delight to read.
Thanks for putting a smile to my face!
Connie
Comment Written by Connie C on 02-May-2019

Cartage by closetpoetjester

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What a nice surprise to log on to FanStory and find my old friend posting something! And what a great little poem this is about the ever-so-handy grocery cart. I loved every single line! The very end where you refer to it as a "chariot" that is awaiting its release from its "parking spot" is so clever. And I like how you personified the cart.
A few years back I wrote about a grocery cart as well, only to cover its demise as it went from a shiny cart to the holder of a homeless person's belongings. There are lots of homeless individuals in our town, and grocery carts are in big demand.
So good to see you here.
Lots of hugs,
Connie xoxoxo

Comment Written by Connie C on 02-May-2019

The Feather Bed by nancy_e_davis

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I love this poem, Nancy. It is beautifully written and conjures up so many memories of when I would stay with my paternal grandmother and get to sleep in her bed with her. I had a dozen or so boy cousins, and I was the only granddaughter, so I got that special treatment.
Thank you for sharing and bringing up some beautiful memories.
Connie
Comment Written by Connie C on 18-Apr-2019

Legacy by Tina Crute

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What a sweet and loving tribute to your mother. And you honored her by not only your beautiful words but by also adhering to the 3-6-9 requirements for this poem.
I believe if your mom were alive today, she'd be very proud of your poetry. My best to you in the contest.
Connie
Comment Written by Connie C on 15-Apr-2019

I Want to Read by RodG

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Such a sweet rhyme this and a winner at that! Reminds me a lot of my grandson and granddaughter who are about their age in the poem.
Nice rhyme throughout and just a sweet little story.
Connie
Comment Written by Connie C on 15-Apr-2019


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