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A broken heart by overthemoon

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Nice one Anne, it looks like you have written a bit of a saga, and why not, but the beginning sounds a bit suspicious with Tom having feelings of the unnatural kind for his sister, where will your story take us, as the title suggest, a very unsavory place.
Well said and written, it will be interesting to see how things pan out.
Thanks for sharing Anne, take care and have a wonderful day...Rudy
Comment Written by rudywalsh on 10-Nov-2010

When it doesn't matter anymore by prophetess

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What we write is often a reflection of what is going on in our lives, songs and poetry seem to have this desired effect, love can be like a yo-yo from time to time, I think it's that time of year when lots of things seem to not go right.
Nicely written P, a great sense of anguish between your lines, very creative and well written, I hope you are well, take care...Rudy
Comment Written by rudywalsh on 10-Nov-2010

Breathe My Soul by Gungalo

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Another style of poetry you have adapted to, you are proving that it doesn't matter what style you tackle, you tackle it well with always some nicely executed words.
It's the first time I have seen anyone attempt a senryu suit, it sounds and looks great along with the lovely sexy lady, nice one Gungalo, a true poet...Rudy
Comment Written by rudywalsh on 10-Nov-2010

Dream You Real by Gungalo

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Your poem Gungalosounds like it would make for a perfect sog with the way it plays around with the sounds at the end of each line, they seem to bounce of each other in melody, ''Dream you real'' if I had of talked to my teacher like that useing the same words I know she would have had a go at me and said, why don't you speak properly.
Well done Gungalo, another fine tune...Rudy
Comment Written by rudywalsh on 10-Nov-2010

Music by Kathryn Varuzza
Chapter 64 of the book Jewel Exchange

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You always manage to write a poem for a contest and this one you have managed to enter on time, a nice little acrostic poem well thought-out with great use of words, music is universal, I wonder how life would be without it.
A wonderful write Katie, I like the message entailed, some poetic truth, well done and take good care...Rudy
Comment Written by rudywalsh on 10-Nov-2010

Interruptions by Kathryn Varuzza
Chapter 65 of the book Jewel Exchange

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That's just the way life goes sometimes Katie, it happens all around us and then we get to sit down and have a few moments to ourselves. I can imagine you rushing around waiting to put pen to paper, well done you got there in the end with another magical poem created from nowhere with great presentation and well written verses, you must be a busy bee...Rudy
Comment Written by rudywalsh on 10-Nov-2010

Poppy Waving Sighs by Gungalo

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Another romantic piece from yourself, it must be hard writing blank verse, it's not free verse flowing or ryhme, a bit of fun also by the looks of things, very creative with good presentation, yor man is a lucky one by the sounds of the sigh's that run through your poem, it's always nice to have someone who brings out the best in you when it comes to poetry, well done and hear from you soon...Rudy
Comment Written by rudywalsh on 10-Nov-2010

Kittens, Ponies, Puppies and Swings by Realist101

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Very cute Susan, I lived in the middle of ponie and horse breeding countrie as they say in England, down in the south of England Dorset, for many years I would see wild ponies shetland ponies and shires, beautiful animals, peaceful, so I know where your interest lies with these beautiful creatures.
Very creative Susan with great flow and meaning behind your words, it must swing either way when a child sees their first horse, I remember my sister would scream at the sight of animals and once she got use to it then she would find the pleasure in its presence, but she was a strange lass anyway, and still is today LOL.
Thanks for the pleasure as usual Susan, take care and have a great day...Rudy
Comment Written by rudywalsh on 09-Nov-2010

Hearts by Kathryn Varuzza
Chapter 62 of the book Jewel Exchange

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Not your usual write Katie, but all the same very cute and well written, it's simple and yet say's everything you need to know about a full heart that could be broken., don't you hate it when you you create a 5-7-5 poem, you find the perfect words only to see you have one syllable to many, it's just the way it goes sometimes, very good Katie, another gem towards the collection, well done take care have a grand day...Rudy
Comment Written by rudywalsh on 09-Nov-2010

Be kind by Kathryn Varuzza
Chapter 63 of the book Jewel Exchange

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Very clever, a fine little ditty that children would appriciate, a story to set them on the path to reading, you can't beat a book work to inspire little ones to read, especially if your poem and image were framed together, the kind of thing that really works.
Very captivating, a must that would inspire lots of children, creative and well written, take care Katie, hear from you soon...Rudy
Comment Written by rudywalsh on 09-Nov-2010


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