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At the Pond by Amanda Louise Davis

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What a wonderful and well written description of life at the pond. I especially like the dragonflies and sunbeams. You make feel like I am there, (I wish I were).
Comment Written by BlueMarble on 30-Jun-2020
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Kissed by Margaret Bednar

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How wonderful! You painted a beautiful picture of ocean side serenity in your words then complimented it with a display of talent from your artists brush. I love both the words and the picture.
Comment Written by BlueMarble on 17-Jun-2020
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The Apocalypse is Now by jaylar

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Now there's some food for thought. In today's world of instant news via the internet, you have no way of knowing what you are swallowing. Best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written by BlueMarble on 12-May-2020

Any Body by Cogitator

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Thank you for finding such a beautiful way to express the truth. I especially like the conclusion you come to in the closing verse. Keep inspiring and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written by BlueMarble on 07-May-2020
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Forbidden Black Rick by jaylar

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Another fun example of your off beat way of seeing things.

"He always brought gladness
He never brought hurt.
But now that I have him,
Let's cover him with dirt."

I'm sure that in today's world Rick is the one guy that has job security. One little glitch I found to point out is in the line " I drive big car it's shiny and black" Should that be "a big car?"
Comment Written by BlueMarble on 14-Apr-2020

A Crooked Stack by easyeverett

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I have to give this a standing ovation. You have done a masterful job of defining the hypocrisy we call politics. I really enjoyed the smiles it gave me to read it.
Comment Written by BlueMarble on 09-Apr-2020

Tomorrow by Jennifer Cleveland

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I like your thinking here. We have no way of knowing what the future holds or even if there is a future, so today is what really matters. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written by BlueMarble on 09-Apr-2020
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Court of Accountability by Aaqib Naeem

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Wonderful! I love the stand you take in this writing. Unfortunately, history is full of those who refused the bandwagon, from Martin Luther King among others all the way back to Jesus and probably before. Best of luck in the contest. I see a winner here.
Comment Written by BlueMarble on 01-Mar-2020
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wander in wonder by judester

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What a beautiful thought to start my day with. Very well expressed. Thank you for sharing and I do wish you well in the contest.
Comment Written by BlueMarble on 15-Aug-2019
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The Season of My Confusion! by A. Willow Bends

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I love your wonderful rhyming style with this poem, and I couldn't agree with you more. One thing I did notice after attempting to decipher the rules for the umpteenth time, the poem needs some sort of seasonal reference. Perhaps you could rename it The Season Of My Bewilderment, or something. :)
Comment Written by BlueMarble on 14-Aug-2019
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