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From Jingle Bells to Jesus by livelylinda

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First of all, this is almost impossible to read; the font on red background hurts the eyes.
The first lines,
"jingle bells
jingle jangle bells" is hard to put together with too many j's.
Also, the line,
"large cups of egg nog in every hand" is too wordy and throws off the flow.
Comment Written by n.rosej. on 07-Nov-2013

The Child Called Snow by livelylinda

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This is such a disappointing poem. It does not live up to its title at all. The flow does not work well, as well as the whole piece's message; it is confusing. The line, "she is here again" does not fit. This needs a whole lot more work.
Comment Written by n.rosej. on 07-Nov-2013
Read and reviewed with blinders on.

No Place Like Home by Dean Kuch

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OMGosh, this is such a lovely piece of writing. This poem IS POETRY...every word's flow, and the choice of words as well. It is a love poem, for home. This has touched my heart. The images are beautiful, along with the dedication to your parents, and Dorothy, Judy Garland. She was a wonderful actress, singer, dancer; artist. EXQUISITE!
Comment Written by n.rosej. on 06-Nov-2013

Compassion by harmony13

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This is a wonderful Nonet. A real nice topic to write
about as well, and the message is clear all through.
Good luck in the contest. Blessings : )
Comment Written by n.rosej. on 06-Nov-2013

Serenity by harmony13

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First, the image is stunning, and so inspiring to write about. Second, your wording flows so wonderfully. This piece is a great write! Good luck in the contest! Blessings : )
Comment Written by n.rosej. on 06-Nov-2013

A nature walk by Jackarrie
Chapter 41 of the book Poetry

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I've said this before, but it needs to be said again...your writing flows so gracefully, and with such ease; you are truly talented. Beautiful words, and I love the way you always add 'decoration' at the top and bottom, it accentuates beautifully.
Comment Written by n.rosej. on 06-Nov-2013

An Eagle's Prime by michaelcahill

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YOU, Mr. Cahill, are a romantic! lol I'm sure I'm not telling you anything you don't already know though. Another great write, and yes, your form is just lovely!
"wings afire in competition with the sun
a fitting end
to an eagle's prime"

LOVE IT!
Comment Written by n.rosej. on 06-Nov-2013

Elephants by persevere

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It is a shame what is happening to the elephants. I read about it all the time. These poachers need to be STOPPED! There are people that patrol for poachers, and I pray the Lord bless them. This poem gets to the heart of the problem. It is good of you, to write about this, bringing it to the attention of the masses.
Comment Written by n.rosej. on 04-Nov-2013

Oh, Pandora What Have You Done? by RYME4U

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WONDERFUL! I absolutely love this poem. It is unique in the topic alone, and such a great one to write about. Flows off the page, and really gets down to the nitty-gritty about the 'ugliness' in the world. The words you chose to describe the ugliness is tactful and speaks the truth. What I love the best however, is the last stanza, and the last line, that indeed, there IS HOPE, a tiny grain...that hope is the 'mustard seed' of FAITH, in our Lord Jesus! HATS OFF!
Comment Written by n.rosej. on 04-Nov-2013

I Ask You by l.raven

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This is such a glorious piece. A wonderful way in which to give honor to our Lord. It explains its message very clearly, great flow, and love the pic too! BRAVO!! Blessings : )
Comment Written by n.rosej. on 04-Nov-2013


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