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No Atheists in Foxholes by Dean Kuch

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Okay Deano. I would have rather seen this being SeaBees in the Navy but you guys are just a part of our Navy. It's just that us Navy boys have enough sense to stay on the ship and leg you Marines stop the bullets.
Being that I got lots of friends who were in the Marines and that your last line was great in this 5-7-5 Contest poem, I decided what the heck a six it is.
Good luck in the voting and Happy Writing.
AW Brooks
Comment Written by a.w.brooks on 16-Mar-2016

Rattlesnake Road by Dean Kuch

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No need for me to play the vid Deano I know the song real well but it is one of my favorites.
This kick ass my man and the lyrics go perfect with the music provided.

Awesome writing as usual.
Happy Writing
AW Brooks
Comment Written by a.w.brooks on 13-Mar-2016

Moribund by Dean Kuch

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Nobody likes a sore loser Deano but most of all me. I say just let it roll off you and don't worry about it. Your writing always speaks for itself.

Great poem with hood rhymes and flow.
Happy Writing.
AW Brooks
Comment Written by a.w.brooks on 12-Mar-2016

Who Gnu? by Dean Kuch

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This was a little hard to see on my phone but I made it bigger and it was fine.
After spending 14 years in the Navy, I can see how something like this might happen for real, lol.
Communication in our armed forces leaves a lot to interpretation sometimes and there is very little common sense where the top brass is concerned. You had me rolling on the floor with this one because I could see something like this actually happening.
Good luck in the contest and Happy Writing.
AW Brooks
Comment Written by a.w.brooks on 10-Mar-2016
Read and reviewed with blinders on.

That Inner Voice by Dean Kuch

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First of all I hardly never read poems that are not promoted because no body reads mine. But since I found this on your page I said sure just this one time I will. I also don't give out very many six stars to short poems too but I thought this was really funny and creative do I say why not.
Do good in the contest if it is not over yet that is.
Happy writing
AW Brooks
Comment Written by a.w.brooks on 09-Mar-2016
Read and reviewed with blinders on.

Don't Count on It by Dean Kuch

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I really got a good laugh out of reading this not because its a crazy phobia to think someone might have but because sheep are some of the lamest animals there is. To think someone could actually be scared of these timid beasts is hilarious to me.
I hope your kidding lol.
Great internal and end rhyming in this, and that picture is a hoot!
Good job, and good luck in the contest.
Happy writing.
AW Brooks
Comment Written by a.w.brooks on 07-Mar-2016
Read and reviewed with blinders on.

Death & Consequences A -Z by Dean Kuch

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Dino, I thought I was one of the last survivors of Edward Gorey's stuff because you have to admit it is not normal thought you are normal if you like to read this sort of things. I hope other people like me who knows you and you have kids knows this is all just you joking. If they know Gorey's poems they will understand st least. You imitated hisbpoems perfect even the art you used looks a lot like his.
Good job but you are reallyvwarped, lol. I mean that in a good dort of way. Haha.
Happy Writing.
AW Brooks.
Comment Written by a.w.brooks on 06-Mar-2016

~Lenore Revisited~ by Dean Kuch

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I always like Poe's poems and I think you did a good job here of bringing him and Lenore back from their graves Deano a lot of your poem have the old language used it works great in this and that last line made my hairs in the back if my neck stand up.
Great poem and revival Happy Writing
AW Brooks
Comment Written by a.w.brooks on 04-Mar-2016

The Sounds of Silence by Dean Kuch

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Great work here, Deano. I was singing hour lyrics in my head to that old classic. I hope it was supposed to be a little funny because I was laughing there at the end
I hope you do good in the contest take care and Happy writing
AW Brooks
Comment Written by a.w.brooks on 03-Mar-2016

1 Dark Knight by Dean Kuch

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I am glad I had a six left still for this because I love all things dealing with Medieval times and Gothic. I even have a book of my own of Gothic romance poems. If you ever get a chance to you can check it out and add a poem to the book if you want.
This sounds like the kind of dating profile I might use lol.
Great entry for for the contest. Good luck and Happy Writing.
A.W. Brooks
Comment Written by a.w.brooks on 01-Mar-2016
Read and reviewed with blinders on.


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