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Abraham Lincoln's Two Mothers by judiverse

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Cheers, Judi;
>nice work, very nice, and I've been loving everyone of them.
>Got to go.
>Trouble with what's fair to some, is not always fair to all.
>Understand!
>Fair becomes and issue, when one and two and maybe three feel it's an issue, and the letter are coming in from my club of the issue I'm dealing with. I'm not alone.
>But I'll leave alone and sad but happy that I have integrity.
>God Bless.
Alx
Comment Written by krys123 on 11-May-2019

Zoanthrophy by lyenochka
Chapter 144 of the book Word for That

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Cheers, Helen,
It stops here and it really hurt a lot to even think I would be say this to you, especially.
>I'm sending your my stash and pumps, put them to good use, I know your heart, I think, but I know.
>I'm in the emails.
Alx
Comment Written by krys123 on 11-May-2019

Mothers are precious... by royowen

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What heart!
> Cheers, Roy;
> Amazing how much and how is the heart's powerful impact on one's emotions. And how beautifully they hang can produce runes to tingle up the spine and create tears of happiness, integrity and faithful courageousness.
> And watching you grow is phenomenal, then you writing has been absolutely great and just gets better every time. Not so much the lines in the verses themselves is how you express them has become utterly fantastic.
> Take care and have a good one especially because you deserve it, Roy.
> Have a good one, as I'm heading out soon. I'll keep in touch.........
Alx
Comment Written by krys123 on 11-May-2019

The Words You Never Said by karenina

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Oh, my, oh, my, oh, my!
>Phew!
> Beautiful poem, Karenina;
> Wonderful sonnet and classy too.
> Didn't recognize any of flip-flops, crew cuts, abolitionists or sneaky undesirable punctuation that are digging on the ground to escape. No, just some Straight out in great American Sonnet Poetry, and who's that Shakespeare dude anyway?
>As is really lovely, Karenina, and your heart bleeds through every vowel while the consonants are the tissues, wiping up the tears.
>And sorry I couldn't give you 36 sixes.
> I'm hitting the hot dusty, giving one last Jimmy Duranty goodbye, chuckle!
> So take care and have a good one.
Alx
Comment Written by krys123 on 11-May-2019

Tribute to a beautiful boy. by royowen

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Cheers, Roy;
> did you used to have a goatee or a beard,hen you were growing up, because Nick sure look familiarly like you.
>Wonderful poem, and one that I could see the love in the heart that just flows out of each word when squeezed through the eyes of sincerity.
> I'm going to miss it.
> Take care and have a good on my friend.
Alx
Comment Written by krys123 on 11-May-2019

Euphorbia by lyenochka

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Cheers, Helen;
> You bring people together and that's why love you.
> You write always acknowledging others, and others seems to be a common word in your vocabulary, but with so much compassion.
> This is beautiful, now I know about this plan, and, because of your adventures and journeys and sharing, makes it all happen.
>I'm finishing up here.
> After today and maybe in a week or shorter is going to fade away.
> Take care and have a good one.
Alx
Comment Written by krys123 on 11-May-2019

All Those Hats! by damommy

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Cheers, Damommy;
> You do write beautifully and you've successfully achieved in doing it, without any puncs' or gramar's that I recognized.
>The enjambment flow particularly very , Despite the fact that you are using mirrored lines repetitively oscillating them in every verse.
> I could recognize a slight repetitiveness, but it became more like white noise after the second verse. I think this writing should be a longer versed poem, maybe just for that fact. I don't know, just throwing things out.
>All Taiwan coming from even though you probably don't want to hear it. I will time that I think the policies and the integrity of the policies of fan story it weakened to the fact that the originality and intent of fan story is the loss of the wayside. And I believe that winning writers shouldn't be advertising Fan Story is legitimately honest and fair contest provider, when the contest judges are also entries and that winners can win four months in a row. So, maybe it's over them complaining about not winning I've had my share, quite my share, I slide onto small contest's at all.
> This cheating in the background, getting emails for votes. As that happened and after seven years I think I've seen enough.
Take care and have a good one sorry I burnt your eyes up reading this, but I have held back my conscience too long.
> Well bless you and your family and all the endeavors and things you do and take care and have a good one, Damommy.
Alx
Comment Written by krys123 on 11-May-2019

Today by giraffmang
Chapter 19 of the book Anthology

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Cheers, Mr. G;
>Your ending will do it every time! no more stars, man, this is just plain good. Dear definitive descriptions were very good but I think they were better in another writing, or what I'm trying to get it is, how you approach being descriptive change, I think, oh hell I don't know, but something happened.
>you always seem to aesthetically surround your descriptiveness so,She adamantly and that's why I thought you'd do it when describing the rusty sink? Like in stead of the water, maybe the large orange rustic stain in the basin would, maybe, have been more than what I was expecting? Looking at it that way and not the water, straight off, but what water was causing. You done that type of descriptiveness and many of the other works. So far not so much in this one. No excuses or anything it's just I see the difference. Obviously the conceptual theme has a lot to do with it.
>Sounds like he lived, as if he uses that new air-freshener called "TROPICAL TORNADO-BREEZE"! Chuckle!
>Oops! "Inside Gavin's one-room cocoon(maybe comma?) everything stood still.?
>When opening the door, Gavin, saw the beginning of life and its meaning and the pills on the floor became an Alzheimer's memory.
>Thanks for sharing my friend take care and have a good one, one of the reason around in the police want to stay here.
Alx
Comment Written by krys123 on 11-May-2019

Minute by giraffmang

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Cheers, Mr. G;
> Are you talking about being stopped by a California Highway Patrol who just looks like somebody from Tennessee with the baggie flaps for thighs and boots to go up to his knees, particularly black and shiny And of course can't get the Ray-Ban sunglasses. But if it was in Tennessee be smoking a cigar, as he blows it in your face and says, "You know how fast you were going, Chucky?"
>, right to the point very definitive good job.
Alx
Comment Written by krys123 on 10-May-2019

Judgment by lyenochka
Chapter 18 of the book Lost on Planet Z

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Cheers, Helen:|
>Much better characterization and visual identification a spot on, But the names keep getting to me, as I can't remember them or visualize them yet.
> Grumpy, fat tummy, purple head?
>Bahbee and his friends, All dressed alike, had different type of clothing a different type of colors, or their feet wall webbed? You see what I'm getting at?having a hard time identifying The names of the figure's personality Or that character persons attributes.
> Otherwise the story is great.
> Enough For now
take care
Alx
Comment Written by krys123 on 10-May-2019


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