My Comments

My Cats (5-7-5) by Barb Hensongispsaca
Chapter 39 of the book Logan's Poems

Excellent

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It's cute. I love it. I do. So adorable. Seeing your 5-7-5 poetry and author's notes, I thought of you as a very loving person.

Thank you for sharing your work. May God bless you all.

Comment Written by Zephyr05 on 02-Jun-2013

Of Mixing Tenses by Raoul D'Harmental

Excellent

I get it. It's good. But, maybe it will make some other people conscious about their grammar. *laughs* It's just my opinion.

Thank you for sharing your work. May God bless you all.

Comment Written by Zephyr05 on 02-Jun-2013

Sticks and Stones by Max Edon

Excellent

I gave it five stars because I saw your intentions are clear. But, I became quite sensitive in the use of profanity. But, it's good.

Thank you for sharing your work. May God bless you all.

Comment Written by Zephyr05 on 02-Jun-2013

Hyacinths by Rondeno

Excellent

It deserves five stars. May God's love spread everywhere. Thank you. You write in pleasant terms.

Thank you for sharing your work. May God bless you all.

Comment Written by Zephyr05 on 02-Jun-2013

Back to Life by judy corcoran

Excellent

Bravo. It opens up my eyes that whatever road you take...whatever challenges lie ahead of you...whatever decisions you'll take, don't forget that you're holding God's hand.

Thank you for sharing your work. May God bless you.

Comment Written by Zephyr05 on 02-Jun-2013

The Sun (The Universe Series) by chasennov
Chapter 11 of the book The Universe Series

Excellent

I thought that the first line only contains four syllables. Am I right? :)
But overall, it showcases simplicity and the truth. I mean, it does express the true meaning or description of the sun.

Thank you for sharing your work. May God bless you all.

Comment Written by Zephyr05 on 02-Jun-2013

Inside-out-Flip by Cookie333

Excellent

I like it. It's new to me. I quite sense a little confusion. At the beginning, I didn't understand what it is all about. At the end, I thought it was about you dealing with your secrets, yourself. You want to get out of the cage you yourself made. Am I right? *laughs* Overall, It's amazing. I'm used in reading poems with the same style. And you brought a new look for me.

Thank you for sharing your work. May God bless you all.

Comment Written by Zephyr05 on 02-Jun-2013

Today an Open Door by Cookie333

Excellent

Nice style. Unique. Very unique. What I like the most is the meaning of the poem. Just call on God, and He'll answer back maybe not now, not tomorrow, but He will according to His will.

Thank you for sharing your work. May God bless you all.

Comment Written by Zephyr05 on 02-Jun-2013

The Price by Leineco

Excellent

Undeniably beautiful. The flow isn't forced. It flows like a river, a silent river. I only find the words used to deep, but it is amazing.

Thank you for sharing your work. May God bless you all.

Comment Written by Zephyr05 on 02-Jun-2013

Chimera by Fireshadow

Excellent

It's haunting me. Believe me. It is well-crafted. The structure is good. I love it. But, I think I need a dictionary for some difficult words. *laughs* Actually, I kind of lost understanding in your work, yet it's wonderful.

Thank you for sharing it. May God bless you all.

Comment Written by Zephyr05 on 02-Jun-2013