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Jacob Collins

Horror Running Amok by GoodHearted Woman

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I loved those last two lines, I'm sure that you mean Dean Kuch who writes a lot of horror poetry and stories on here, he's very good at what he does. I loved how you built up the suspense in this piece and then turning it into something light hearted in the end. An excellent piece, good luck in the contest.
Comment Written by Jacob Collins on 28-Feb-2017

Lessons Learned by Groshans

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I had to smile at the last line. I think what's happening in the world today is reminiscent of what happened in 1930s Germany, it's a scary thought but I hope we can come out the other side clean. An engaging piece, I thought the dialogue flowed well. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written by Jacob Collins on 28-Feb-2017

haiku suite (gills-gasping fish) by Sis Cat
Chapter 4 of the book Haiku Club Challenge Multi-Author

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I thought you really brought the image to life in this piece, I loved your choice of words. An eagle is an amazing creature. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written by Jacob Collins on 28-Feb-2017

The Slip by nancy_e_davis

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This was beautifully written, Nancy. You're final stanza made me think of Miss Havisham, I really liked how you put it together and that he got what he deserved in the end from straying away from the one thing that was pure in his life. A well written piece, thanks for sharing.
Comment Written by Jacob Collins on 28-Feb-2017

haiku (late rainstorm) by Sis Cat
Chapter 12 of the book Haiku Club Challenge Multi-Author

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Your poem resonated with me. There have been times recently when I have thought that spring is on its way and that we've seen the worst of the bad weather but then winter comes back around, slapping us around the face. An excellent piece, thanks for sharing.
Comment Written by Jacob Collins on 28-Feb-2017

Under the Weather by Louise Michelle

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While I admire people who go through life always saying that they are alright, it does make me angry when they won't go and visit a doctor, particularly if it's someone that you know and love. A well written piece, thanks for sharing.
Comment Written by Jacob Collins on 28-Feb-2017

A Paradigm of Compassion by rama devi

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Your poem is so true. I can't believe there are those in government who would rather protect their own wealth and career rather than protect our planet, and if our planet goes, we go, it's infuriating that they don't seem to understand that. An excellent piece! Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written by Jacob Collins on 28-Feb-2017

Artful Adoration by Irish Rain

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A beautiful piece of imagery, I thought it worked really well with the picture. It must be difficult to sum an image up in just three lines but you did it perfectly here. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written by Jacob Collins on 28-Feb-2017

a jisei poem (bitter pills) by shelley kaye

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This very much reflects on the circle of life, perhaps we never truly die but come back in some form of another. A well written piece.
Comment Written by Jacob Collins on 28-Feb-2017

Simple Things I Hold Dear by Margaret Snowdon

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It is true, sometimes we forget to pause and think how beautiful and extraordinary life is, a lot of the time we let material things get in the way. A beautiful piece of imagery, Margaret, thanks for sharing.
Comment Written by Jacob Collins on 27-Feb-2017


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