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Judge Not... by Dean Kuch

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I really enjoyed this. Now days everyone is so damn politically correct, one is afraid of uttering the Lord's name, fearing pissing somebody off. Good job. The rhythm flowed and carried you from the top of the piece to the bottom. Great work.
Comment Written by sharonmealler on 03-Apr-2016

Remembering you by Ben Colder

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This was an extremely moving piece. I'm sure anyone who has lost a special loved one has these sorts of memories. One special time that is the apex of your love for them. A sound, a smell, a place where that person's memory comes to life. This is a very nice tribute to someone you love dearly. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written by sharonmealler on 03-Apr-2016

Dolly by Dean Kuch
Prologue of the book Fanstory's Tales from the Tomb

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I can't wait for the movie to come out. This is very interesting. The descriptive imagery was great, allowing me to see and feel the thunderstorm. I have lived through the agony of a botched C-section resulting in the loss of my first-born, a 8 month boy we named D J, after his daddy. I never got to see D J, as I died 3 times on the operating table. By the time I was allowed to wake up, D J was already buried. So I can understand the father not wanting to let his baby go. But rest assured, D J is not on my shelf. He's on my bed. Just kidding. Great story.
Comment Written by sharonmealler on 03-Apr-2016

Psycho Circus by Dean Kuch

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Great imagery. I turned the computer so my daughter could see. She hates, hates, hates clowns. I enjoyed the descriptive words you used to describe the circus. Just one question, calliopes? Is that the merry-go-rounds and such? I'm not familiar with that word. Overall, great poem.
Comment Written by sharonmealler on 27-Mar-2016

Scotty Buchs, Summer Daze & Cats... by Dean Kuch
Chapter 3 of the book Fanstory's Tales from the Tomb

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This was an "interesting" story to say the least. No faults with punctuation or typo's. I work for a vet, been there 15 years now and believe me, I have seen the aftermath of these real life Scotty Buchs. We've seen dogs come in with their ears or tails cut off while the animals were awake, then the idiots couldn't get the bleeding to stop. We've had dogs and cats that people threw hot oil on. You wouldn't believe it. Anyway, thanks for sharing your story
Comment Written by sharonmealler on 25-Mar-2016

Nature Sings by Ben Colder

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I really like this. I don't know enough about poetry to critique it, but I know what I like. I often sit on the bank of the river near our home and just watch and listen. You can find your inner peace if you just be still.
Comment Written by sharonmealler on 23-Mar-2016

A Matter of Life & Death by Dean Kuch

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I really enjoyed this poem. I've always prided myself in living the best life I can, following the golden rule, do unto others, and such. This was a very sweet sentiment. Thank you for sharing
Comment Written by sharonmealler on 08-Mar-2016

The Hunger by Dean Kuch

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This was a very informative and entertaining piece. I really enjoyed the little movie clip after the poem. I didn't see any errors in grammar or punctuation. It flowed very well and was easy to read and follow.
Comment Written by sharonmealler on 04-Feb-2016

The Facade Crumbles by Jackreese
Chapter 32 of the book Secrets of Windwood

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Nail biting suspense! I love it. I am glued to my seat and can't wait until the movie comes out. I look forward to seeing more of this fascinating book. One error I saw was "He could her screams as he climbed into the front seat and started the truck." I think you left out the word hear. Otherwise remarkable chapter. Can't wait for the next one.
Comment Written by sharonmealler on 04-Feb-2016

Love Sets Sail by Dean Kuch

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I really like this poem, Dean. Having been widowed, I can relate to losing your true love. My husband was my beacon in the night, my warmth in the winter. When you lose your soul-mate, part of you goes too. He was my zing. I really appreciate you sharing this story with us. You have great talent my friend. You constantly put out over-the-top reading material that draws me in. Great job.
Comment Written by sharonmealler on 31-Jan-2016


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