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A Montage of the Great Grey Owl by Pam (respa)

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A beautiful poem coupled with great images. Well done. I learned something about owls. While you have chosen not to rhyme, there is good rhythm and flow.
Comment Written by TomyKan on 17-Jan-2016

I, Monster. by Dean Kuch

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Excellent. Good rhythm, rhyme and flow, and as usual, very grim. A good take on Jekyll and Hyde. I loved the phrase "bask in the sin".
Comment Written by TomyKan on 17-Jan-2016

A Childhood Memory by AnnieDawn

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I too remember an event when I was three. It was a dramatic and tramatic experience of baling out water from a wagon being drawn by horses over a flooded roadway during the massive flooding of the Columbia River the Spring of 1948. I had turned three in Feb. 1948.
Comment Written by TomyKan on 06-Jan-2016
Read and reviewed with blinders on.

River of Words by I am Cat
Chapter 9 of the book Self Peace

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You've used fascinating metaphors in your free verse to capture how our "river of words" can go all over the place before becoming "still" and "blissful". Well done.
Comment Written by TomyKan on 04-Jan-2016

With Violets And With Daffodils by Day Z Chayn
Chapter 43 of the book Weeds

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Your love for Abbie Rose comes through well. For you she is the most beautiful Rose in the garden, more captivating than the other flowers, be they violets or daffodils. Well done.
Comment Written by TomyKan on 04-Jan-2016

The Dancing Trees: A Sonnet by Pam (respa)

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Well written, with good rhythm, rhyme and flow. Nature has a way of calming us, and you have captured this in the swaying of trees.
Comment Written by TomyKan on 04-Jan-2016

A New Year Dawning by Dean Kuch

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You've captured another perspective about A New Year Dawning, which I am sure many feel, and as usual, it is well written. I believe, however, that we can choose what to feel, and its a shame when some people choose not to be happy and hopeful.
Comment Written by TomyKan on 04-Jan-2016

Open Wide the Gates of Hell by Dean Kuch

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As usual, this is well written, not only from a technical perspective, but because it is so expressive of the struggle within us all between good and evil. We can choose which will survive by nourishing the good and starving the evil.
Comment Written by TomyKan on 04-Jan-2016

I Love You So by Dean Kuch

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You are a great poet, Dean, whether morbid or not. Good rhythm, rhyme and flow. Poem expresses true love, with the dying partner wanting his love to be happy even without him/her, including finding another love ASAP.
Comment Written by TomyKan on 04-Jan-2016

One Good Turn by Dean Kuch

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I loved this, Dean, in spite of the length. Very descriptive language, and a wierd sense of humour (I liked that). Well done.
Comment Written by TomyKan on 31-Dec-2015


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