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Spotted Dick by Mike Stevens

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This is certainly more than a commentary and philosophy. It is a highly opinionated, highly exaggerated, highly full of baloney piece of excuse for writing. Where are the examples, the proof, the accreditation for sources that prove the point trying to be made? PLUS, and I mean that a big-heap of plus, where are the language warnings for this highly vulgar piece, where are the sex warnings for this alleged writing. Philosophy and commentary? More like an opinionated, political satire.
Comment Written by Swampfox1 on 25-Oct-2018

Heating up in the High Country by duchessofdrumborg

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This is hilarious, birds in bikinis, wow. It is well written. I did not find any errors. I see you saw the movie, tiny weenie polka dot bikini. Interesting story.
Comment Written by Swampfox1 on 24-Oct-2018

At Death We Part by prettybluebirds

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I somehow wonder how death by cancer can be squeezed into 50 words. True what you say about cancer. My wife has been lucky and saved by the grace of God six times already, six different bouts with the Big C. Well written. I did not find any errors.
Comment Written by Swampfox1 on 24-Oct-2018

A Palette Of Perfumes by easyeverett1

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I like the first stanza. I question that nature would share a hidden sin. I wish there were an explanation for that one. almost every stanza is laden with images and is deserving of being praised as a poem. Good job.
Comment Written by Swampfox1 on 24-Oct-2018

Oh, Rats! by Dean Kuch

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50 word story. Wow! Good luck in the contest, hope you do well. This is pretty good, but I never heard a rat screech, or scream. The return of the bubonic plague. Pretty cool and the picture is more scary than the story, almost.
Comment Written by Swampfox1 on 24-Oct-2018
Read and reviewed with blinders on.

Rag-and-Bone Man by tfawcus
Chapter 20 of the book The French Letter

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Well written, I did not find any errors and there is adventure in here and it plays out well. Your French is alright but you can not always translate directly from English to French. It should be "ArrĂȘte , ou je te tire!" Of course you did have a direct translation for "Stop or I shoot". Of course, that could go either way. Either way, a good story well written
Comment Written by Swampfox1 on 24-Oct-2018

haiku (seagulls swarm then dive) by Mrs. KT

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This works well and when I think of it the poem is a near perfect example of what seagulls do. The syllable count is right on the money. "progressive dinner" sort of blows my mind but it is a dinner in progress, I would imagine.
Comment Written by Swampfox1 on 24-Oct-2018

Oh, Lordy, RUN.... by sandramitchell
Chapter 10 of the book This Time - That Time 3

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It is certainly well written, I did not find any errors. I like the time travel thing, the idea of these people being on assignment, etc. It all works well. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written by Swampfox1 on 24-Oct-2018

The Fireplace by humpwhistle

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I read it all the way through. It's a good story, it's well written. I really don't think St. Petter talks in a New York Slang, I can believe the gangster does, however. I can put up with some words such as "anus" but not with words that use God to cuss things. NO WARNING! You are supposed to give warnings. You have a mistake, "more satisfyin' that a juicy," that should be than. If that's normal talk then they sure didn't learn much.
Comment Written by Swampfox1 on 24-Oct-2018

The Crow's Nest by Lady Jane

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So, you are saying that crows anticipate Halloween much as they do customers in a Walmart parking lot? Hmmm. It's a very nice halloween poem, it is somewhat reminiscent of the Alfred Hitchcock movie "The Birds".
Comment Written by Swampfox1 on 24-Oct-2018


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