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The Connection by Alexander E Poet
Chapter 22 of the book Poems by Alexander E Poet

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I agree, love is something everyone needs to survive. Without love you are just walking this earth an empty shell. And we should all love one another as brother an sister as we are all the same no matter race or gender but unfortunately we are still not there as people. Hopefully soon. Nicely written. Thank you for writing this and Happy New Year! NB
Comment Written by nbonner on 31-Dec-2017

A Sign of the Times by Brigitte Elko

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I myself was relieved when Christmas was over. My kids are older so it's more stressful to buy gifts because they're so picky. It's always one holiday after another and it seems like we never get a break! Nicely written. Thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest. NB
Comment Written by nbonner on 31-Dec-2017
Read and reviewed with blinders on.

Welcome to My World by Poetic Friend

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Nicely written and the poem flowed very well. I am new to FanStory so I didn't know you very well but I am sorry to hear about your mother and that you are leaving the site. God is an awesome God and with His grace I believe your mother will walk again! There is nothing He cannot do. Thank you for sharing your story and God bless. NB
Comment Written by nbonner on 31-Dec-2017

Clocks and Calendars by rama devi

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Short and sweet. It has the 5-7-5 rules required for the contest. I like picture used it makes the words of the poem come alive. The new year is coming! Happy New Year and good luck in the contest! NB
Comment Written by nbonner on 31-Dec-2017

The Oppotunity For Peace by Alexander E Poet
Chapter 20 of the book Poems by Alexander E Poet

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It would be nice to have a world of no hate, no hunger, no prejudice. If only people would just open their eyes on what's happening to our nation, it's falling. Thank you for writing this, it was an excellent write. NB
Comment Written by nbonner on 31-Dec-2017

What Water Whispers by michaelcahill

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We forget sometimes that we can get our point across without writing a long poem. Sometimes it has stronger meaning when it's short. This is a great message, ignorance is hard as a mountain. I like the metaphor's used and the picture used was great. Thank you for sharing. NB
Comment Written by nbonner on 31-Dec-2017

Faith by easyeverett1

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My faith is tested everyday. I have no doubt God is watching over me so I walk in His grace and blindly in His faith daily. I'm not here to tell you what to believe but God believes in you even if you don't (my belief). I thought this was and excellent write and a great topic that I think most people go through in their minds everyday. Thank you for writing this and Happy New Year! NB
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The wall by DALLAS01

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I can soooo relate! The 'wall' we run into when we sometimes write is so frustrating at times. But you are right, all it takes sometimes is to relax, sometimes walk away and come back and all is well. Thanks for sharing this. Nicely written. NB
Comment Written by nbonner on 31-Dec-2017

A Day And A Night At The Lake by easyeverett1

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I like the imagery and metaphors used, it makes the poem come alive. It reminds me of a time we went camping at the lake. The kids playing in the day, the moon shining so bright at night, beautiful. Thank you for sharing this memory. Nicely written. NB
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Procrastination by prettybluebirds

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I liked what the dialogue was about. New year's resolutions are so hard to stick to. You make them every year and every year most people never stick to them or they start them then somehow slowly go off them. Not sure how that happens. I thought it was well written and it flowed nicely. Thank you for sharing. NB
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