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Iza Deleanu

Birds and Blooms

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I enjoyed your story a lot and the language of the flowers as messengers of our desires could be very different in different countries.Yellow back home means jealousy, red - love, white - purity, etc. I think you have a winner here so good luck with the contest.
Comment Written by Iza Deleanu on 26-Nov-2020
Read and reviewed with blinders on.

Stupid Rest by elpsog

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Reading between the lines, sometimes being a poet it's a curse for the people who you think they are close to you, but they don't get you. The only thing left to do it's to take refuge into writing: "Yeah, I will do my very best
To end this stupid rest"
Comment Written by Iza Deleanu on 26-Nov-2020

Ghosts of Thanksgiving Past by Mary Vigasin

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You are so right we need to keep a spot on the table for those who re not with us anymore :"
On this day offer a toast or a prayer to them and your memories of joy and laughter." Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
Comment Written by Iza Deleanu on 26-Nov-2020

Lady of the lake by JRaeVaughn

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I enjoyed your poem and for the last stanza I have a small suggestion, I think if for the last line you replace breast with wrist, you may let the reader go into a different dimension and state of mind :"she holds your heart in her palm - my heart held to her breast
simplistic, the heart of nature held close to her breast"she holds your heart in her palm - my heart held to her breast
simplistic, the heart of nature held close to her wrist" Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
Comment Written by Iza Deleanu on 26-Nov-2020

Searching by Anne Johnston

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Hi Anne, you made me laugh and I am with you on this one, you captured masterfully my dilemma/"It's easy they said,
Just write what is in your head.
Still searching." Thank you for writing and good luck with the contest.
Comment Written by Iza Deleanu on 26-Nov-2020

Snowbound - 1900 by Pantygynt
Chapter 56 of the book The Maid of the Mill

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WOw, amazing organizational skills for the old Josh, it's a pity that the son is useless,but at least the daughter seems to have inherited some of her mother and father life skills. Thank you for sharing yet another great chapter.
Comment Written by Iza Deleanu on 26-Nov-2020

I choose the snow by Violet Pearl2

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Love your joy for snow, and even if I am already one month in the winter I like how you describe the joy of snow: ", I feel myself falling down, I feel the joy of the chilly wind blowing through my fur as I fall. I melt into the beautiful white blanket of snow. It's wonderful, wonderful! I am free, I am one with the snow. " Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
Comment Written by Iza Deleanu on 26-Nov-2020

To Steal A Kiss by Raoul D'Harmental

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Wow, what a choice of words, very beautiful and mysterious: "s through with a swoosh and swish.
To be a zephyr is my wish;
Each time one whistles through I brood
And muse how as a wisp I would" Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
Comment Written by Iza Deleanu on 26-Nov-2020

Holiday Cancellations by robyn corum

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Yup, you are so right sister they cancelled it officially from the stores in Manitoba, and in Alberta we might have to spend it by ourselves no family and friends this year: "
Since Christmas fun has all been canceled,
there'll be no need to trim our mantles.
Can't shop for gifts we'd choose with love--
instead, there's sprays, and masks, and gloves"
Comment Written by Iza Deleanu on 26-Nov-2020

Stand Strong Believe In Good by Sandra du Plessis
Chapter 166 of the book Daily Blessings from God

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I need a reminder that life goes on pandemic or not, and that we must stay true to ourselves and God.:"In love, we wait
have faith in God;
hope never ends
endure the pain." Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
Comment Written by Iza Deleanu on 26-Nov-2020


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