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Marilyn Lou Berry

Her Life Desperately Broken by patcelaw

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I like how this very short poem tells a lovely story with a happy ending! Wonderful phrasing ("He showed His redemptive power,
now she walks with Him ev'ry hour") and excellent rhyming. I hope it is an entry as it is very competitive.
Comment Written by Marilyn Lou Berry on 03-Mar-2020

Rest for Eyes by lyenochka

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Theme of out times eloquently poetized. I love your photo which is so serene. Your rhymes are great and I think the 2 middle lines are most excellent!
Comment Written by Marilyn Lou Berry on 03-Mar-2020

Spring Skies by lyenochka

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With beautiful elegance you craft a delight. "...rains on well-coiffed manes" is amazing. And the first line of your last stanza is certainly accurate for the beginning of the new spring.
Comment Written by Marilyn Lou Berry on 01-Mar-2020

The Fly Orchid by Dolly'sPoems

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Ohhhh, a bug poem. I love bugs and bug poems. Fascinating plant that I'd love to see for real, but your poem eloquently paints a visual that I can mentally hold.
Comment Written by Marilyn Lou Berry on 01-Mar-2020

The Big Question. by Rhymer

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Yup, your poem speaks a glaring truth in an elegant way. Very nice rhyming scheme and poetic expression is cleverly crafted. I like how you begin the first stanza and end the second stanza with the same basic question of why. VERY good read.
Comment Written by Marilyn Lou Berry on 28-Feb-2020

Tweep by lyenochka
Chapter 190 of the book Word for That

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Always a fun read, a fun way to learn. Your ease with writing about new vocab words makes it easy to learn by not even realizing we are learning. Your last line is to become a classic: "Hoping your life is peaceful and without interactions with twits, twerpts and tweeps." Agreed and no kidding!
Comment Written by Marilyn Lou Berry on 28-Feb-2020

Balance at Work by Darlene Franklin

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As your poem discusses balance, so is it represented as balanced in structure and presentation. I really appreciate your first line because it introduces the topic in an engaging way... we must proceed to discover why not all or nothings for you. Enjoyed it greatly.
Comment Written by Marilyn Lou Berry on 28-Feb-2020

6 Words by the13thpoet

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You short short poetry is so often something we should carry on our shirts for all to see and appreciate. I do so appreciate your wise and practical sentiments. Really nice read.
Comment Written by Marilyn Lou Berry on 28-Feb-2020

Peony Pleasure Domes by Dolly'sPoems

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Wow, peony pleasure at its best; artfully written with grace and style. And with a little bow to the rose is offered tenderly. I just love when poems about flowers are written so engagingly. A joy to read.
Comment Written by Marilyn Lou Berry on 28-Feb-2020

Remote Parking and Meter Maid by lyenochka

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Haha, an amusing anecdote-type of poem that paints a funny, modern visual. It shows how useful today's technology can really be outside in the real and challenging world. Nicely written.
Comment Written by Marilyn Lou Berry on 28-Feb-2020


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