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 Category:  General Poetry
  Posted: November 12, 2020      Views: 30

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I don't know what I write until I write it. I make mistakes, but what I write comes from my heart. I used to post what I wrote that same day. Now, I take a little more time because I write to make you smile.

He is an accomplished poet and is currently at the #88 spot on this years rankings.

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Two Nove Otto nine line poems.
"Bringing Hope with a Smile" by poetwatch
I hope my Muse awakes to hear
how hard it is without her near.
I miss her like the falling rain

that has not fallen from the sky.
What falls are leaves when they are dry,
like forgotten tears, down the drain.

So help me, Sweetheart, let's arrange
a lovely poem not sounding strange.
Let us bring hope with no life's pain,

and walk with love. Since we're apart
it's hard to smile with half a heart.
Without you, it cannot be sealed.

Sweetheart, give me your loving bliss
to dry their tears, a tender kiss.
Together, we form our Lord's shield,

for divine spirits take a part
in the rebirth of ravaged hearts.
As they recover, hope's revealed.

Author Notes
I don't know if this is correct, but I wrote it for Hope with a Smile. :) We all need to feel a little love when we cry.

Thank you Jesuel.
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