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About rebirth and forgiveness
Song/ Leaving Satan's Hell by Yvon
 Category:  General Poetry
  Posted: July 5, 2019      Views: 8

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I've been writing for over 40 years. I enjoy meditation and am interested in both western and eastern spiritual practices.

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Yes, the people stood up
Washed away their tears- X3 'Yes/ And/ Yes' on all these stanzas
Leaving Satan's hell
without showing any fear

Angels in their midst
guide them from this hole
Evil's thrown aside
when love is what is known

Yes, the people stood up
washed away their tears- X3
Leaving Satan's hell
without showing any fear

The darkness there inside
Burned up with all their sins
A new life is now born
As God rises within

Yes, the people stood up
washed away their tears- X3
Leaving Satan's hell
without showing any fear

Thousands of these souls
are cleansed with pure desire
Standing tall they reach up
In God's true cleansing fire

Yes, the people stood up
washed away their tears- X3
Leaving Satan's hell
without showing any fear

Pure desire saved their souls
God's Love opened up their hearts
The mind is cleansed once more
As they're given one more start

Yes, the people stood up
washed away their tears X3
Leaving Satan's hell
without showing any fear

Those with evil intent
were thrown back in Satan's hell
The people stood there cheering
as the doors closed on this well

Yes, the people stood up
washed away their tears
Leaving Satan's hell
without showing any fear

Author Notes
Thank you Eileen0204 for the picture. The X3 is for the whole stanzas not just that line.
Pays one point and 2 member cents. Artwork by eileen0204 at FanArtReview.com

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