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 Category:  General Poetry
  Posted: October 5, 2019      Views: 67

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the sunset forgives
"haiku (red and orange fingers)" by Marilyn Lou Berry
red and orange fingers
stretch above the horizon
sins are cleansed

Sunset Haiku writing prompt entry

Writing Prompt
Write a haiku on the subject of a sunset

Basic rules:

17 syllables OR LESS
(Does NOT have to be 5-7-5 syllables)
3 lines (short/long/short)
Present tense
Two grammatically interconnected lines of concrete imagery in lines 1 and 2 or 2 and 3 and a satori in lines 3 or 1
No caps (except proper names, etc.)
Minimal punctuation
NO personification (attributing human qualities to animal or object)
Artwork allowed
Title like this: haiku (first line)

Author Notes
Sunsets are a way of erasing the sins of the day to start fresh the next day
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