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 Category:  General Non-Fiction
  Posted: October 15, 2019      Views: 26

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This work has reached the exceptional level
Young teenager reflecting on future
"Moving To the Island" by Flyaway1

Introducing my granddaughter Angelina. This is her work, not mine.( These are song lyrics)

Lying in bed do not know what to do.
Thinkin bout all my issues.
Comin back and thinkin bout you.

My problems are growing
Nothing you say is helping
Stop trying, it's not working out

I think there might be an end to this
But it's turning out of be a hopeful wish
I want to move out
And see what your side is all about

All my thinkin might be true
It might be better out there with you
Will it end, will it stop?
From all this hurtin I will pop

I might be there tomorrow

But I know it will only end in sorrow
So tell me
What's it gonna be?
I can only tell you what I see

I think there might be an end to this
But it's turning out to be a hopeful wish
I want to move out
And see what your side is all about

Author Notes
This is not my writing nor is it in a contest. Sharing a piece that my granddaughter wrote. She turned 13 in May. She is interested in acting, singing and writing.

She struggles with life and will actually write. Although this piece was intended for a song)

We are very close due to common interests and common mental health issues.
Pays one point and 2 member cents.

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