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 Category:  General Poetry
  Posted: January 18, 2020      Views: 112

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 ABOUT
JAYBIRD1 

Born--1925 in the foothills of Appalachia eastern Ky.Have been writing poetry for
seventy five years.I prefer poetry that rhymes. Sonnets are my favorite form. Give me
a look.Hopefully ,you might like some of them.

He is an accomplished poet and is currently at the #21 spot on this years rankings.

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"A Liberated Wife" by jaybird1
Long years ago we said our vows
which ended with a kiss.
By thinking on those years I see
some trials, some tears and bliss.

My husband leads in many ways,
but often leans on me.
Though mutual sharing is our goal,
we sometimes disagree.

My friends think I'm submissive,
that seems my natural bent.
We walk the married road, perhaps,
the way God surely meant.

Our children honor and respect,
that greatly pleases us.
The tender harmony we share
is an even greater plus.

In retrospect, I clearly see
our life held little strife
so thank you Lord, I'm proud to be
a liberated wife.

 

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My wife shared this with me, many times.I believe any
happy, well adjusted married couple would feel this way
Pays one point and 2 member cents.

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