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 Category:  General Poetry
  Posted: March 3, 2020      Views: 120

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KIWISTEVEH 
Following on from the world-wide acclaim and rave reviews for my first book, I am pleased to announce that I have sufficiently recovered from the jet-lag suffered to attend all those book signings and have started work on my second masterpiece, "Fort - more...

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"haiku (in the far pasture)" by kiwisteveh

across spring pasture

two wild horses gallop free

my heart leaps

 

Haiku Poetry Contest contest entry

Author Notes
I have edited this following some excellent suggestions from several reviewers.

Yep, I know this is 5-7-3 - the rules state that it is not compulsory to follow the more traditional 5-7-5 format and it is clear, at least to me, that the shortened satori line is much stronger.
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