Take Your Burdens to Jesus
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 Category:  General Poetry
  Posted: May 21, 2020      Views: 19

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I was a full time science and mathematics teacher for 40 years, was happily married for almost 51 years and am blessed with three children and six grandchildren . Our children live on three different continents and I am so grateful to have the faci - more...

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She comes and goes
"Visitor" by persevere
A being hard to trace, a secret kept
She waylays me at night in depth of dreams
Inspiring, and beguiling she's adept
Preferring me relaxed , or so it seems
Sadly for months she may disappear
Leaving me damp , run down and depressed
Why can't she feel my need for her care
My intentions of writing so clearly expressed
A pen, and paper must be on hand
To record my friend's sound erudition
Memory impaired, words leave this land
Writing envisioned, perhaps publication
She pursues her own timetable
A muse, encouraging all to enable





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