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 Category:  Commentary and Philosophy Poetry
  Posted: August 18, 2020      Views: 99

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"I Stop and Stare" by Raffaelina Lowcock


Sometimes when I am feeling down
I take a walk around the town
I see much beauty everywhere
It helps me when I stop and stare
 
I wander on into the park
I see the dogs I hear them bark
I see the owners how they care
It helps me when I stop and stare
 
Then as I turn and walk about
I change the path a different route
A path arrayed with gardens fair
It helps me when I stop and stare
 
Now I have changed my attitude
I know that staring’s rather rude
But seeing good folks how they care
It helps me when I stop and stare

 


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Write a poem of any type. It must have at least three stanzas. And one line in the poem must repeat in every stanza.
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Not really staring, but taking in the different scenarios to remind me how blessed I am to be able to enjoy my surroundings.
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