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 Category:  Commentary and Philosophy Poetry
  Posted: August 23, 2020      Views: 75

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For more than 50 years I wrote and set aside my writing hoping someday, as I came into a life of repose, I would be able to review, organize and find my inner voice through my writing. This wonderful site provides such a safe haven, instruction, crit - more...

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He is an accomplished poet and is currently at the #6 spot on this years rankings.

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When love goes wrong
"Unpacking Love" by JLR
Unneeded, not wanted
Numb to the replays
Promises unkept, unmet
Accepting no more drama
Crushing words creating trauma
Kindness falters under stress
Intimacy bound in cubes of ice
No more spark of hope rebounding
Grinding our relationship to a halt.

Little, by little, you've pushed me away,
Over the little things, I did not say
Vainglorious your needs, mine humility -
Everyone for themselves, where love is lacking!

Acrostic Poem writing prompt entry

Writing Prompt
Write an acrostic poem. Acrostic Poetry is where the first letter of each line spells a word, usually using the same words as in the title. See an example in the announcement.

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Acrostic: Unpacking Love

Thanks for the use of Broken Angels by Denise B on FanArtReview.com
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