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 Category:  General Poetry
  Posted: October 21, 2020      Views: 50
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Chapter 5 of the book Carmen' s Poetry Book
Teenage pregnancy
"Surprise" by Carmen Ducharme
Love is something I thought I'd never share
Because for me there was no one to care
We messed around and got caught
Me being pregnant is what it brought
I thought I'd be alone with no one there
Because for us I thought you would not care
At first I did not tell you because I was very scared
I thought you would say our lives
Was something you didn't want to share
But you acted very different
With us you wanted to be
The baby , you and me
A happy family
Closer together we became
Because of me you weren't ashamed
It's with you I want to be
And I know you feel the same as me
Together forever the baby, me and you
The family with love that's really true
For with you I want to spend my life
Be there for you the best mother and wife
I will always love you forever and ever
At no time will we be apart never
The key to my heart is what you have
and must keep
Because our love for each other is very deep !


Uplifting Poetry! writing prompt entry

Writing Prompt
Can you write a poem that cheers lonely hearts, soothes tired brains, inspires the soul. Any style, any length.

The book continues with Longing For Love . We will provide a link to it when you review this below.

Author Notes
I got pregnant at 14 i wrote this poem when I was 15 .Crazy times being in love and married at such a young age
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