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 Category:  Humor Poetry
  Posted: October 23, 2020      Views: 16

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YOU ARE THE APPLE OF MY EYE!
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I've never seen apples spill out of
mine or anyone's eyes

Nor have I been able to locate a
stem to remove an apple in my eye

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And this I can see and that I can feel


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