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 Category:  Letters and Diary Poetry
  Posted: October 24, 2020      Views: 30
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Chapter 3 of the book Carmen' s Poetry Book
A poem about an ending relationship
"Reality Check" by Carmen Ducharme
I love a man
Who doesn't love me
So why do I stay ?
Because I don't want to be alone
But aren't I alone anyway ?
Why doesn't he love me ?
Why is he so cruel
Why does he treat me
Like a fool
I wish he could just take me
Into his strong arms
And hold me tight
But I know
That's just a dream
Because to me
He's only mean
He will never love me
He doesn't care
I need to face this
His love isn't there
There will be no more kisses
Or holding me tight
No more telling me
"I love you "
Before we kiss "Goodnight"
I guess my dreams are over
Never to come true
Im never gonna be that girl
That means the most to you
I really hate to say Good-Bye
To throw our love away
Because in your arms
Is where I'd love to stay
But I keep forgetting
Your love is already gone
I just keep on trying
To hold on
I have cried so many tears
My heart is overflowing with pain
For all I ever wanted
Was to feel your love again !

The book continues with Together Forever . We will provide a link to it when you review this below.

Author Notes
He was my soul mate but could not get off drugs .The drugs were his first n only love unfortunately
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