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 Category:  General Poetry
  Posted: November 25, 2020      Views: 9

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This is gonna hurt
"Hit the Wall" by Carlos' girl
now i cried for help
one last time
now your hands go up
one last time
now i will not call
one last time
now i hit your wall
one last time
now i finally fell
one last time

now you made me wrong
one last time
now i sang my song
one last time
now im losing hope
one last time
now let go the rope
one last time
now i ain't a wife
one last time

i won't touch your life
one more time

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