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 Category:  General Poetry
  Posted: December 27, 2020      Views: 114

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VICTORTOUCHE 
Victor Touche ? Actually, a 59 plus six year imposition on this planet. Who.... always wanted to slow down, explore the other side of his brain, and amount to something other than a paycheck. Of course the other side of me would argue paycheck first - more...

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Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level
prisoners see this quite differently
"The Toilet" by victortouche
Roses
lay sublimely
as they rest
in a toilet's
water test.

Why
do they
burst forth
with evolution's
bright light?

And unfold
with all a
leaf's seduction.

While we
maintain
an illusion
that prisoners
have resolved.

For toilet water
remains
that which
it is,

A basic level
we remain
too blind
to see.

A necessity
that
you and I
would crawl
to drink from.

The well
of humanity.

Recognized

Author Notes
I worked in a prison.
Lived for a week in a prison.

They make coffee,
tea, from toilet
bowl water.

If you want respect,
if you desire
an interview...

you will drink.
Pays one point and 2 member cents.

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