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 Category:  General Poetry
  Posted: January 8, 2021      Views: 10

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wrote Day before new years, 11,11,12,12 abcb
"Won't Someone Help Me" by Lulube



Won't someone reach out and help me please, maybe?
Help me to feel that I've done, that which I can
Let me finally accept, then bury wrong doings
And secure the risks taken, from whence I began

I'd try placid now, listen when being told
How in my life, I helped many who struggled
Often keeping myself in the back of the line
Knowing well the fate for some; streams of tears puddled

I'm losing my spunk and walking on shaky legs
I'm acting bitchy but it's not how I feel
So won't someone reach out and help me please, maybe?
Help me, I'll help you, we can find an even keel
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