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 Category:  Spiritual Poetry
  Posted: January 17, 2021      Views: 31
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"I am learning to write."
"It has been a long Journey with many difficulties...
"Losses, Depressions, and other Abnormalities."
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Doctor Ricky 1024.

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Chapter 9 of the book "Flowered Dreams"
The weather report.
"Eve of Dawn" by Ricky1024
"Eve of Dawn"
(A Dedication)
Written on January 15th, 2021
By Doctor Ricky 1024
Copyright © Fanstory 2021
'All Rights Reserved'

He lies Deep within his Tomb!
Coffins lid Closed!
No time but Doom?
And, He Cries?
Because he knows Why?
Why He is There?
"Once Upon a Time"
He had a Dream!
Yes, of a Son named Jason!
But you see?
Sometimes Things Just Don't Work out?
The Way it Should Be?
So, He Awaits.
Yes, in his "Casket of HATE!"
To Blame for it ALL!
He's never FORGIVING!
And, no Longer is He LIVING!
His Pain is IMMENSE!
But you see?
There's still a Chance?
A little Hope?
At the end of his Rope?
A Chance for his Life Again?
To go On?
"Eve of *Dawn"

Approximate Word Count: 234

The book continues with Resemblance of Reality2003?. We will provide a link to it when you review this below.

Author Notes
*Dawn: noun
new day,sunrise,emergence
This is based on my son Jason's short life.
And, my immense pain.
And I continued now and it's been over seventeen years.
After His organs were offered received on April Fool's Day 2003.
To learn more about
'Organ-Tissue Donations?'
Simply contact my dearest friend Lara S. Moretti the L.S.W. with
"The Gift of Life'
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania at
"I Mourn'd and shall Mourn with ever-returning spring..."
Walt Whitman.
"I Mourn'd and shall Mourn forever and ever...
"With each and every Returning-Spring..."
Richard Edward Smrkovsky
Special thanks goes out first, as always, to Heavenly Father and His Son Jesus Christ.
Fanstory and Tom the Administrator.
Fan Art Review, this Amazing Artist and Talented Writer, cleo85'
And, her Incredible Picture Entitled,
"On the break of Dawn"
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