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 Category:  General Poetry
  Posted: February 23, 2021      Views: 132

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 ABOUT
VICTORTOUCHE 
Victor Touche ? Actually, a 59 plus six year imposition on this planet. Who.... always wanted to slow down, explore the other side of his brain, and amount to something other than a paycheck. Of course the other side of me would argue paycheck first - more...

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The Master Bedroom
"The Bedroom" by victortouche
The bedroom...
you must admit,
is an interesting place.

Yes,
it can be that,
and maybe
should be that,

but I'm talkin'
'bout everything else=
essentially.

The master bedroom;
do you sleep in yours?

I've always wanted
to sleep in mine too.

Eighteen years so far,
and I've only slept there
after a no-climb stairs
hip surgery.

Kind of
messed up
all the house's
routines.

It's a bit sad
being an inconvenience
to everyone,

in the house
I (ahem) pay for,
I maintain,
and occasionally
would like
to sleep in;

let alone...
enjoy.

There are
quite a few
reasons for this.

None of which
appear as reasonable
to me.

Wait,
I think maybe,
I got it.

Men just
don't understand,
aren't sensitive,
never home-

Work,
excuses,
lies, (usually not)
care only
for themselves.

I can never
figure out,
how a negative
environment;

can eventually
force a man
to look elsewhere,

can you?






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I don't know,
just had to argue
the other side.
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