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 Category:  Romance Poetry
  Posted: March 4, 2021      Views: 25

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Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level
version of love through a piano
"Just kiss me softly" by Edward Escobar
Play a few notes that
sound like fallen rain
sprinkling the path of
our blessed romance,

let those keys sing to
me in the night when
you are not around,

that I may remember
all the songs your eyes
often revealed when we
were but lovers, while the
piano played a rhythmic
melody just for us two,

that enslaved our hearts
by a new romance taunting
our days of absence while
away from each other's arms
that neither can bear the separation.

Author Notes
Deep in the love when far is the lips that suffer.
Pays one point and 2 member cents. Artwork by cleo85 at FanArtReview.com

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