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 Category:  General Poetry
  Posted: August 18, 2022      Views: 21

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hell is coming accepting the masonic creed
"Howling steam blows" by Darkhorse555
Be careful of the track your on 
somewhere along the way this world lost it's focus 
pushing in the opposite direction controling forces lay plans 
Tell someone something enough times they begin to believe it 
one corrupt system bribes the source calling it destructive 
then in doing so is guilty of assisting and accepting 
This push to change alters in a downward spriral 
failure where on the broken record it scratches the surface 
A lawless bounty holds justice prisoner so to speak correctly ordered 
the criminally insane are now in control brainwashing 
The music stops playing when one's soul awakens 
the silent lament crying over natures casulties a prisioner 
manufacturing a famile to kill loads of God's creatures and creation 
The planet talks about war turning their back on peace 
aiding and abetting stealing monies supplying arms to a conflict 
Watching a dog showing its teeth in pain 
it looked aggresive in the face suffering agony 
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