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I am Chocolate by closetpoetjester
    Haiku Me Contest Winner 
 Category:  General Poetry
  Posted: April 12, 2010      Views: 580

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My only crime?
Got hooked on rhyme

Writ some bad ass meter
now I'm doin' hard time!


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Velvety Smoothness

Melts inside, Warm Fuzziness -

Liquid Happiness

Writing Prompt
Write a Haiku that includes you - about something you love. See the announcement for details and an example.
Haiku Me
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Author Notes
My first real go at a Haiku but outside the box a bit!

Not sure if I am playing by all the rules? Can I capitalise each word as they all seem equally important to me? Also, not sure about punctuation so would appreciate any advice.

For those who didn't get my attempted metaphor have used "warm fuzzy" as a metaphor for winter even though it states the obvious in "warm."
It is "warm" in the sense of maybe rugged up in a big woolly jumper by a toasty fire. But also have meant in the true sense of that "warm fuzzy" feeling you get when you eat chocolate. Kind of a double meaning. Not sure whether I needed to explain.

Thanks for reading.
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