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...cuando la espera acalla...</p>
Su voz

by leomen
 Category:  Romance Poetry
  Posted: April 18, 2011      Views: 477

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Derrotado y sumiso

pequeño

ante la sombra inmensa

del gigante tiempo,

que oscurece mi estatura

y atrapa con sus manos frías

mi última flor,

atropellado

por los sueños grises de sus promesas

todavía espero tembloroso

oír como canción

el tono sutil de su voz ausente,

una frase de alivio que brote de su garganta

y ahuyente la pesadez

de este día, grueso y lento

y espero,

una mirada de luz

que alumbre el sendero oculto de mi dolor....

ahora, ansió la corriente profunda

de su sangre de miel

que me conduce

y me hala con mil fuerzas

a su cascada de alivio,

que empapa

de húmedos deseos mis manos....

aun vigilante, oculto

en una amplia sonrisa de labios fríos

espero un beso

forjado en un deseo fugas,

una breve brisa de su aliento que se esfuma

un rose leve de su piel desnuda,

y luego, andando a solas

atropellado por los quehaceres de mi día

sigo esperando…..  

y se desploman de ansiedad mis pisos

mis alturas de esperanza descienden,

empequeñezco

en las tres dimensiones de la añoranza

y en el cuarto espacio

que me reduce,

a un pensamiento que galopa

sobre la hierba gris de su recuerdo

y se aleja.    
 
 
 
 


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Gracias a la magnifica ilustracion de Lentamente


Pays one point and 2 member cents. Artwork by Lentamente at FanArtReview.com

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