A Word at the Right Time
A relationship analogy.
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My Beautiful Daughter
Her World by GWHARGIS
 Category:  Family Poetry
  Posted: May 17, 2013      Views: 156

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Love to find the moral dilemma in every situation. What makes a good decision. How close can someone go to the dark side of their personality with out losing their soul? Just random good versus evil stuff.

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The world is her oyster
And she is it's pearl.

Open arms that embrace life
She charms the angels with her smile.

One by one they turn to look.
Graceful as a dove.

Exotic eyes and sweeping brows.
Legs, lean and tan.

She thinks she blends
Not special in the least.

I thank God so,
For His gift to me.

My pearl is waiting,
the tide is raising.

The world is a better place.
When she smiles.


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Even fifteen year old girls have those rare lovable moments.
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