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 Category:  Romance Fiction
  Posted: August 8, 2015      Views: 638
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 BARBARA.WILKEY 
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BARBARA.WILKEY 
Mrs. Wilkey's first novel, Two Tattered Hearts, was published by G and J Publishers and can be found at Amazon.com. It's a novel about how Anna, an abused spouse escapes, with her son, the man-made hell she lives in and finds love. < - more...

She is an accomplished novelist and is currently at the #5 spot on the rankings.

She is also an active reviewer and is holding the #51 spot on the top ranked reviewer list.

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Chapter 100 of the book Savannah Love
I need some advice.
"Help!!!!!!" by barbara.wilkey

Background
Paige was raised in Boston and inherited an antebellum house. Cash was hired to restore the house to authenticity. South vs North as these two attempt to find love.


I got my first rejection letter for Savannah Love. It has caused me to take a second look at an area that I have questioned since I wrote the beginning of the novel. (I hate doing it, but...)

The first chapter of Savannah Love is about Bradley Bookman, the Battle of Chickamauga, and how he becomes a ghost. Then I move to the second chapter and begin with Paige and Cash. When I wrote the novel I felt I needed to lay the foundation of Bradley becoming a ghost.
Now, I am wondering if I just need to incorporate Bradley's story during the novel.

Thank you for assisting me with this issue.

I appreciate all the feed back.


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Please don't worry about reviewing what I've written. I can't promote this and I just want to know about Bradley. A PM will work.
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