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 Category:  Humor Poetry
  Posted: April 11, 2016      Views: 19

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Heard a line that brought out lunacy
"Lunatic Line" by Lulube


"I'm so happy, I'm so happy
cause today
I just found my friends
in my head!"

I had to laugh and write that line down
cause it's so dead on right
It can speak anytime for
crazy feelings day and night

I just found my friends
Now they never seem to end
What's that rattling noise
inside my head?

Oh I'm so happy, I'm so happy
How can I stay here for all time?
Will my friends be standing by
for the rest of time
in my head?
Cause today I just found my friends

In my head lying in silence
is the will to let out my friends
I'm so happy again
with my new found friends
in my head

What a line in a song, sung in a movie
Wish I had of listened to more
but my friends were laughing
so loud I couldn't hear,
I just had to pick up my pen
and share
my new found friends
in my head


Author Notes
fun, fun, fun using a line in different splits to write with.
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