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 Category:  General Poetry
  Posted: July 10, 2016      Views: 425
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MOUNTAINWRITER49 

I am recently retired and reside in the most beautiful area of Virginia--the Shenandoah Valley. I find beauty and inspiration in the mountains every day--it is one of my most faithful muses.

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Chapter 40 of the book 2016
Sonnetino: 9 Jul 26 Poetry Potlatch Challenge
"The Goodly Man" by mountainwriter49
The Goodly Man
Sonnetino
 
It seems that we expect apologies
for present and our past inequities,
so much so they’re just meaningless decrees.
 
So many hypocrites will speak the words,
but ‘tis the goodly man who’s rarely heard.

 
10 July 2016

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POETIC FORM:
Sonnetino. This poetic form was created by fellow FanStorian Jyoti (lightlink). The poem consist of a tercet and couplet, both written in iambic pentameter. The tercet follows an A rhyme pattern while the couple follows a B rhyme pattern. Importantly, the tercet presents a scene or conflict and the couplet offers resolution and/or an optional turn.

INSPIRATION:
The 9 July 2016 Poetry Potlatch challenge to write a Sonnetino about an apology, either given or received, accepted or rejected.

WORDS:
Goodly = yes, I meant goodly and not Godly. Goodly as used in this poem's context is an archaic meaning for the word and means 'of good quality.'

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