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 Category:  General Poetry
  Posted: November 8, 2016      Views: 202

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Victor Touche ? Actually, a 59 plus five year imposition on this planet. Who.... always wanted to slow down, explore the other side of his brain, and amount to something other than a paycheck. Of course the other side of me would argue paycheck first - more...

He is an accomplished poet and is currently at the #66 spot on this years rankings.

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"A Concept Is?" by victortouche
Is time concept only,

of or for
the mind?

Things perceptible
in our universe
seem either matter
or energy-

both vying
for entropy.

So time
is a little hard
to pin down,

other than as
a matter of concept.

since when are concepts
subject to
the laws of physics?

is so subjected.

can this be?

This non-material

subject to
physical manipulation.

Think not?
It is.

It has been
scientifically demonstrated
that black holes
distort time.

Not the concept
of time,
although a perception there of
could be argued,

but actual time itself.

To me,
a deafening conundrum.

the concept
remains too

Like relationships,
you give
and they take-

yet you think
and they take...

time after time.


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Ha ha. Oh, I couldn't resist this one.
I will take whatever abuse this musters,
this must see,
the light of day.
Pays one point and 2 member cents.

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