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 Category:  Romance Poetry
  Posted: May 7, 2017      Views: 129

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This work has reached the exceptional level
just poem from one's heart
"Your Divine Embrace" by Jim Lorson Sr

I dream nightly of your wondrous embrace
when passions conquer any foolish pride
with wanton longings stirring deep inside
amidst the moonlight, my heart will encase

deepest yearnings I must surely face
awakened fervor, I've sorely denied
darling, love envisions as our worlds collide
this facade now destroyed, heal me with your grace

my love implores join me on a magical moonbeam
tis your caress that roused my fretful rest
I will search the stars in my final quest
for a place our hearts to live together in a beautiful dream

I will take solace when I am holding you
as I will have no more night dreams of we two







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just an unmetered with various syllable count. rhyme scheme is *abba* throughout the poem except for the final couplet that is *aa*.

thanks for reading this poem,,,,,,,,Jim

many thanks to cleo85 for the use of her perfect artwork!!!
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