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 Category:  Spiritual Poetry
  Posted: August 12, 2017      Views: 115

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Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level
Nature taking back one of its own
"Storm Angels" by kahpot
she was taken away for freedom of life
the day I was kneeling to ask for a wife
praying with Angels for us to be bound
when a flash of light lit up the ground
from a menacing storm starting to grow
retrieving its own from a dying meadow
****
Angels were sending a message to me
this love that I'm asking just cannot be
my answer is given by a wanting storm
as it came to release her mortal form
with whispers of freedom smiling aloud
in protection of heavens brightest cloud
****
rain and wind were sweeping the land
sending all creatures to a higher stand
when thunder joined in lightning's fight
and deathly claps scared birds to flight
the last I could see was carrying my love
her heart set free on the wings of a dove
****
the storm now passing to leave me alone
to look in the rain where love had flown
a storm that knew what I wouldn't hear
a drowning heart desperate with fear
sinking deep in the ground to finally close
when the earth grew soft as the water rose
****
I'll see my love when the heaviest rain falls
roaming with nature and her storm Angels








Angels, a rhyming poem contest entry

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The ending is short ( abrupt) as losing a love or a life can some times be
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