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 Category:  Romance Poetry
  Posted: September 14, 2017      Views: 103

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Divorce is so very painful.
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Remember how life used to be,

When I had you, and you had me.

Nothing else mattered, it was only 'we'


Remember what we used to say

At the beginning and end of every day

"I love you" would not be in the way


Remember how the days flew by

We'd think of tomorrow, you and I

But, tomorrow would vanish no answer to 'why'


Now, there's nothing left to do

Nothing left for me or you

Nothing left for us to do........

Except to just remember.

jjs 9-13

Love Hurts writing prompt entry

Writing Prompt
When romance goes wrong, when it gets you down or when you realise it is hard or impossible. Any kind of poem which shows the downside of love. It is not all smiles and sunshine! Any rhyme, any length.


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My son went through a very painful divorce in 2013. He is left with memories.
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