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 Category:  Commentary and Philosophy Poetry
  Posted: December 31, 2017      Views: 147

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DR DIP 

writes under the pen name Dip

"Terrible, insipid and snide poems. Rhymes are okay, but are mostly forgettable shrugs of language that work for a time and then are easily forgotten." Also not helped by the curious picture you have selected fo - more...

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Nocturnal happenings
"While I was sleeping" by DR DIP
WHILE I WAS SLEEPING

While I was sleeping
You walked the lonely streets of life
For you are homeless
No warm bed to lay your weary head

While I was sleeping

There was fighting and bloodshed
Somewhere in the world
Death in battle and terrorism in our streets

While I was sleeping

There was another dying of hunger
There were natural disasters and devastation
Another murder, another fatal car accident

While I was sleeping

Another child was born
into a world of uncertainty
In a world with an unknown future

I have awakened to a new day
To new challenges
As I greet the morning sun
What challenges lay ahead?

I have awakened to this new day
I now see this devastation
I hear of another death through war and terrorism
Another catastrophe

Yes I have awakened but let sleep be my own peace

dip

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Author Notes
It's funny, I woke this morning after a night's sleep and lay there and wondered just what happened last night in other parts of the world while I slept.
This is not my normal style of rhyming verse. I am stepping outside my comfort zone
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